Fifty Shades of Baggage

As a writer, I can’t read a book without analysing why it worked for me or why it didn’t. A lot of times I’m lucky to get through the first chapter before I’m too bored to go on. While it’s quite likely that I have a short attention span, it’s more likely that I’m jaded from a lot of years of experiencing the craft side of writing fiction, which has made me a harsh critic of my own work, as well as everyone else’s. I’m still analysing what it was about E.L. James’s Fifty Shades of Grey that not only kept me reading to the end, but had me gripped. In the light of the volatile responses to the book, I say that with all shields raised.

There has already been lots written about the writing, so I won’t revisit that. But after careful analysis of  Fifty Shades of Grey, it was the baggage that kept me reading. The story is about a late-blooming virgin, whose mother is a serial marry-er, and a multi-billionaire, whose early childhood was the stuff nightmares are made of, who attempts to introduce said virgin to the BDSM lifestyle as his sub, and the battle of wills that ensues. The story is not about the BDSM lifestyle, but rather about two people trying to rearrange their baggage so they can actually attempt a life together. It’s that baggage rearranging that drives the story. Once I figured out that the baggage actually got me there, I found myself wondering just what it is about baggage that will keep me reading against all odds.

We all have baggage, no matter how perfect our upbringing, no matter how idyllic our childhood. Baggage is just a part of the human condition – you’re born, you get baggage while growing up, then you take your baggage into a relationship with someone who has his own baggage. Voila! Twice the baggage, twice the fun – at least from a story-telling point of view. Story is conflict. No conflict, no story. There’s a reason why the happy ending only happens at the end. Most readers love a happy ending, and though they may fantasise about what happens AFTER the happy ending, no one wants to read about the endless tedium of happiness (though lovely to live, boring to read.)

When there are sparks between two people and the chemistry for a little romance is there, the friction needed to create a fire comes in part from the baggage. Every one of us carries all the baggage of Western culture, religion and pop culture, along with the baggage our parents unwittingly saddle us with, into our relationships, into our bedrooms. There’s bound to be an explosion waiting to happen, or a seething cauldron of repression, or a nasty combination of the two.

While the bedroom is the biggest baggage dump in a couple’s relationship, it’s also the very best place for healing. Sex as healing is very much underrated, in my opinion, and in that respect, E.L. James seemed to know just what the doctor ordered.

Anyone who follows my blog or reads one of my novels knows that I’m a firm believer in sex as a way to heal what ails us. With the release of my first Lakeland Heatwave novel, Body Temperature and Rising, I’ve created a world in which sex is not only healing, but it’s the driving force behind the magic practiced by my witches. I was asked in a recent interview by someone who had read BTR if I really believed in sex magic, and my reply was that it’s the only kind of magic I really do believe in. So here is the magic formula that works for me, the formula that will keep me reading: Two (or more) characters attracted to each other + baggage +complications of everyday life = explosions and seething cauldrons. Add sex liberally at all the right places and the result is Happy ending.

Bring on the baggage!

5 thoughts on “Fifty Shades of Baggage

  1. Hi KD,

    You wrote, “So here is the magic formula that works for me, the formula that will keep me reading: Two (or more) characters attracted to each other + baggage +complications of everyday life = explosions and seething cauldrons. Add sex liberally at all the right places and the result is Happy ending.”

    Excellent, and I agree. The formula works for me too. However, I think the formula is so basic that it works for nearly everyone. The question is, can the author get the formula right?

    It’s like when I’m cooking. I’m given the recipe, and now it’s up to me to put in the correct ingredients and the correct amounts to make my dish taste good. Sometimes I fail, but when I succeed – it’s beautiful.

    The same goes for stories. There really are just a few basic themes out there, no matter how wild you want to make your story. The essence of the story can probably be found in many other stories out there. Can you get that *essence* right?

    I look forward to reading 50 Shades of Grey. Any book that gets raves from readers, over and over and over, has something going for it. This is when I tend to shut the opinion of authors out, many of whom tend to be critical due to a variety of reasons, and just pay attention to what readers are saying.

    Oh, and you should post this review at Amazon and at Goodreads. The author has received tons of reviews, but I’m sure she’d appreciate it!


    1. Thanks for the lovely comment, Jolie!

      I could have gone on and on with this subject because, as you say, when a writer gets it right, it’s amazing, and as writers, we’d be crazy not to try and figure out how they got it right. I spent hours analysing what it was that made this novel work for me when I really didn’t expect it to. That’s information worth knowing, I think.

      Thanks again for the comment!


  2. I haven’t read the book and I don’t care.

    I have read this review and I love every word!

    Thank you!


  3. I have to read this book now, so much has been said about it. A bit like Harry Potter I suppose – soon as we are talking about magic.

    Thanks for sharing your thoughts KD 🙂

    Lily x

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